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I want to say that I really like the fantasy setups/writing/simple art/characters in this game. It's a really great start (there's not much publicly available yet, I think I got through a single play through in about an hour, (I played the non subscriber version)) and I'm really looking forward to more and seeing how it progresses.

Lol when it comes to crazy premises for fantasies in dirty games there's a hump a lot of games hit when trying to set it up that can lose me if they try to be too serious or self conscious about it, the tv report essentially suddenly yelling "Incest is legal!" and that changing anything with some characters thoughts on long established relationships made me laugh, it worked well for me.

I played the sub routes and basically all of the setups really worked for me for my preferences so far, though I did find Linda a little bit shocking/grating being that mean to the player and especially Addison. But I'm not sure that's not setup for a character arc of Linda being de-stressed and a bit kinder later that I would be very down for. But, either way with the writing and setups so far, if the author gets to do what they want to do, I will be invested in learning what happens.

The concept of having all of these story paths for each of the characters with sub and dom routes for each and a sort of choose your own kinks setup being able to filter out/decide on stuff you don't want (ballbusting for me) seems like it's gonna be a lot of work to figure out as the story progresses further. Sounds complex writing characters naturally with 2 versions of them acting scenes, it's gonna be a biiiig ol' work of art if you manage to pull off all of them throughout the entire game half as well as you've set them up so far.

I wasn't expecting to like this art style as much as I do either. It's simple and communicates the characters and setting well.

I wish to support but for the moment I am skint so instead I just want to send kudos on this strong start! Thank you for making something fun!

Also, since many folks seem to have baggage around it and are trying to tamp it down, I wanna speak to support the inclusion of the ntr/cuckolding stuff. For those who don't want it, the game gives you prompts and every option to turn it off. It's a small and entirely avoidable part. But I really appreciate the game exploring that fantasy as it adds another thread to the vibrant weave of kinks and relationships in the game.

Errybody looking up porn games is probably into some kinky stuff at this point in adult gaming, that's what fantasy and porn art is for, safe space. Love for my weirdos. (But also, it's really not a big deal in this game in it's current public state either, plz provide more dev, way more! ^^ )

Thank you for the game!

What a great demo. I already care about these characters.

Despite my still lacking understanding of the internal struggles and difficulties of being trans, this got me really good. The writing is fantastic.

My favourite parts were

- Leo grappling with his nature and beating up on himself for it, I found it very relatable
- Ash dealing with non-threat was hilarious
- The conversation between Leo and Roman over soup hit me with a lot of feels

I also love the clean art style and music.

Mice Tea was something special that I still go back to when I'm struggling, and I'm looking forward to this one very much when it comes out. Thank you for making it!

This is a great start. I love the art, the characters work well and some of the choices and story elements took me by surprise.

If you can keep going like this it's going to be a really quality game.

You guys also put in work to make the environments so far look run down and filthy and the outdoors look pretty lol it definitely adds character to the world rather than the 2034th empty inn i've seen.

The game definitely has a pretty humiliating/sadistic streak to the encounters I found so far which is fun. Though I would also like it if in future she has a chance at some less confronting/more wholesome/more character determined erotic encounters and characters to add variety to the forces driving her towards depravity.

But that's a totally subjective preference, it might be in the plans or not, and you've already made something super awesome doing what you're doing.

Thanks for the game! Well done! Goodluck!

Yeah this was great. Controls very smooth, fun powerups and I like the look!

I have had a great time playing your game summer sweeper and now this. I love your take on the ntr kink! I look forward to progress with this one! I enjoyed my time with it a lot. There is a lot of promise here.

To me your games have felt very catchy because your mechanics are blended together to give individually simple mechanisms and artwork a huge amount of depth and gameplay choice and hotness compared to the norm. Feels like a very unique strength to your games to have the mechanics and player choices working together, with or against rng to be what make achieving things in game hotter and more impactful.

I'm gonna provide a bit of critical feedback on my experience because I found it really interesting, with the asterisk that I really enjoyed it and this may or may not be at all relevant because I know it's far from finished and my preference may totally clash with your goals, feel free to disregard. 

Uniquely for me among the adult games I've played, I found this had almost a bit too much game for me. Between the card battles, currencies, room maintenance, bonuses, breaches and character stats mechanics there is SO much going on here. I had to read and try and reread tips feeling lost for a good while before I really began to understand the systems in play.

Where (for me) summer sweeper had very neat puzzles and a great gradual learning curve, the rapid introduction to everything in this game was teetering on too much. As a player I think I'm generally pretty good at picking up these sorts of systems but this one really made me work, if I wasn't into the kinks, I might've put it down before I realised how great it was.

If there was a difficulty setting to make it a bit simpler, or lengthen the learning curve without messing with your goal or the length of the overall game too much, I would appreciate that. 

I also found the arousal, lewdness and room potion icon split in this game very confusing/unintuitive, regarding what is needed to proc what events and exactly how they each interact with eachother. I've played through about 6~ times now and I still don't exactly know and I really did try to read through all the tips.

Oh and one little thing, when the game starts up I didn't know which brother was speaking, and who I was going to be thinking of as my character until the end of the cutscene. Maybe I missed an indicator about it, but my confusion around it blunted a bit of the initial impact of the setup until I understood it later.

But seriously, thankyou for your games! They've been great fun, well executed and super unique! I'm really looking forward to updates!

Edit - So I just read your upcoming updates to version 3 and it sounds like you've adjusted and changed many/all of these things for it. Lol I hope the review is at least a fun read if it's entirely obsolete.

Hrm, that worked against shark girl for me. Its the door from the camera view to the southwest of your office? But if closing that doesn't stop her for you maybe it's bugging.

Ahhhhh, good to know, thankyou! I thought I tried clicking that and it closed, but I probably hit quit.

Rip, I started again already, but I did save a screenshot in case it might help. Thankyou again for the game! It's fantastic! This must've taken so much work in both design and content.

For shark girl, there's a door behind your office that opens with a sound queue, if you make any noise with piggy when that door is open she barges in. You need to shut the door using the camera view of that door. Or if she does try and barge into your office you can click on her a lot as she's trying to enter to try and keep her out.

Dunno about the tape gathering though. Seems to be bugged for me where I could only get 1 tape and that wouldn't play.

Kudos to the voice actor! Who is she? She did great! Her and the trainer visual design and poses at the start were the standout parts of this game for me.

Rather than a character focused story I'd say this follows the format of a sweet, shallow and short kinky fantasy.

It follows a singular encounter with this girl from your first meeting -> workout -> shower -> end. It sets up the main character's motivation just enough to put us at the scene and leaves it there to focus on how attractive and powerful the trainer is.

The focus of this game is really on a love of the kinks involved: futa, femdom and body worship. If those are your jams and you like good voice acting, and you have a spare dollar, have at it, I think it's worth it. Just be prepared for it to be over immediately after the shower!

The voice acting really was great though.

@Developer, feedback for 2 things I'd personally have liked in this game or a possible consideration for future ones you might make.

1. It would've been great to have at the ending some sort of brief sweet/cute wrap up. Like a picture and text showing a couple months later, showing mc having made significant progress in his fitness goals while also still being lusted after/or dated/or rewarded with sex by trainer waifu. That'd be a wholesome way to tie it back to the characters at the end and give it a sense of time and progress while preparing me for an ending.

2. If instead of this being their first meeting, to have the story of this as being an encounter where they've already been training and flirting for weeks/months. Where this is the story of the day they finally act on it, that could've made the characters seem a bit more real and a little less fantastical.

Though that totally might clash with what you were going for or not have been feasible, these were just thoughts I had about the story structure.

Thanks for the game!

Wow the story and mechanics and artstyle here are all things I haven't seen it's like in the dirty game space, or any game space. This is fantastic.

There is actually so much more depth to the mechanics here than a simple cyoa story. With the random encounters I don't know how many I've missed. Between that and pursuing a different advice to the princess there are a lot of reasons to replay this game.

Also, the music fits the old school adventure games the art is based on super well.

My only trouble is that at the tail end of my first playthrough I got a crash and I can't avoid this predetermined moment so I am going to have to play through again. Also at some point my encounters with Maria returned purely to the first scene's handholding, though I don't know if that's a bug or part of the mechanics that I wasn't doing a good job with.

Despite that I definitely recommend checking this game out, with the writing and characters and art and plots. A lot of work has gone into this. I'm truly shocked such a long game is free.

Though fyi to anyone looking for a quickie this one is a slowburn. But entirely worth.

@developer, would you like an image of the unity crash report I got? Is that helpful?

I am also suffering this issue. I think I'm also missing out on mini games possibly from what I'm reading here? Or maybe I'm just not seeing them? 

All I to have to fix is the pipe in the goo factory, the breaker on the wall and the box in the main circus, are these counted as minigames? Or am I totally off? I'm on night 12. I only have 1 tape that doesn't let me play it.

Fun game concept though.

I appreciated this one, the story is good. It lets the player pick parts of the 2 main character's reactions to things so you can sortof set the power dynamics between them yourself which was neat.

Where it fell down for me was that I didn't find the art very attractive. But if you could somehow have more conventionally appealing, developed art for this game it'd be easy to get traction I think due to the quality of the story and the well explored kinks and mechanics.

I'd also suggest going full lore nerd with future game descriptions. Your condensing of the plot to: "The basic story is that an Elf girl in distress ends up knocking on the door of a minotaur." is totally true, but a brief description of the characters, their plights/motivations would've pulled me in better especially because in game your story was developed enough to stand up to that.

In terms of gameplay feedback I'd request:

1. giving me more save file options. Unless I saw it wrong I only had 5 which is too few for this game's many good story choices.

2. Alter some of the text colouring, (the log text for me is grey on a grey background), and

3. A few typos got through

Otherwise I think you've done a really good job! For a first game this is seriously great work! Looking forward to what you'll do next.

In a future game if you do more in this same genre/kink I would like an option for a more mental battle with temptation and corruption with less force/imprisonment involved? But that's completely personal, and maybe my choices just didn't lead to that path of game. (I got the true ending)

Thanks for the game!

Whoah, 50? I assume some/many of those are reskins? Else your animator/s and modeler/s may never see the light of day again but we'd allllll benefit, hehe.

I showed a friend Onyx because her design was something they'd love. A quote from them was, "better jiggle physics than DOA: beach volleyball."

I'm glad my feedback was helpful! I hope this game goes all the way, while also hoping ya'll don't crunch yourselves for it. 

Goodluck in development!! You're making an awesome thing.

Lol what are you smoking? Have you played it? Do you know any other adult games with 3d animation as fluid as this? If so please send me their names cause I haven't seen anything like this. This alpha was really out of the ordinary to me in terms of quality and look so I wrote a really positive review and provided feedback.

That ain't no ad.

A couple comments some just complaining about needing to pay 5 bucks seems like a pretty sad thing for a developer to be greeted by when they've actually made the start of something fucking sweet that I want them to finish. Or is there some other reason I should be suspicious of or against this game?

The animation quality here is fucking great. I would recommend checking this out to anyone interested in high quality 3d animations and who's down for a small mechanical preview of what will hopefully become a much bigger game. It is worth the $5.

This is way beyond what I was expecting to find. You guys are putting in work and I love the main character design and movement. This looks amazing and has so much promise.

Going to provide feedback from my alpha experience that would've made my time with it a little more intuitive - (Though i get that it's still an alpha and you're probably just yet to set these things up so this might be totally useless info, but just in case it could help).

As a beat'em up noob, and someone who didn't check the control screen, I didn't realize that I could alter my attacks with ctrl for ages. Provided I didn't just miss some mention of it earlier, a small heads up that ctrl alters attacks at the start of a level would've made me so much less confused about how to deal with the little bugs.

I also didn't understand that I was successfully gathering animations while playing. I misinterpretted and thought I needed to beat all the waves in a level to actually unlock the animations after the failure message said I'd lose drops and items, and thought that the bestiary/codex would hold the animations gallery. So I played trying to reach the end of the many wave levels and ended up failing a lot.

It was only after I got out to the main menu again that I saw the gallery there and that it had saved what I'd collected. So, some sort of change in wording to say that collecting the animations doesn't reset after a failed run would be good? Though again I might've just missed something.

Finally, Is there actually a victory point in the 40+ wave levels? Or is it never-ending? It would be great to know that too.

This was seriously awesome though. I played to level 18 and made it to something like wave 45~ before exhaustion. The combat and enemy attacks hold up for what it has at the moment and it really was a lot of fun to try.

Also if you do read this, I'd love to know how many enemies/stages/battles you are aiming to have for the completed game? And are you going to put a story and voicing for it? If so, I hope you find some amazing voice talent worthy of it and regardless, I hope it gets huge!

Thanks for this gaming experience!

I loved this!

You said it was self indulgent in the bonus section, I found it to be an honest, super charming look into a sweet kinky fantasy. You put effort into giving the little details about the pursuits of the characters that is gonna make the whole game stick with me.

It's crazy that you made it all in a month.

If this is self indulgent, please keep indulging! This was really heartwarming and it made me so happy playing it.